writing learning story

In writing we have been writing about myth's and legends like Maui and the sun and the Apache myth.I wrote about Maui and the sun here is my proof. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rRKPGl-lOlbzDvFt9HXypDQ_ZtEA02YWSpxfCTr3xj4/edit

I had to use interesting sentence starters. I had to use descriptive words so that I can paint a picture in my readers head.  


I am good adding ideas that are from the real world because it's better then making it up because when you make something up it's not that easy you have to make up a setting make up who is the characters and other stuff , and when it is real someone can read it and can connect to it, because it's real 

I got better at having a great start to hook my reader in because when people read it they want to read more                       

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LCmm3UTTygWcLQn2LrB9I0mfTJ31uiznOPK3W8S9tgI/edit

It is hard to write about something you don't want to write about because you know nothing about the topic 



I feel frustrated when I don't know anything about the topic because I can't connect to it and don't have any ideas.

my next steps are to

• Get better at writing about a topic I don't know anything 

I am going to achieve my next steps: by asking someone for help or searching it up.

I used the key competency of

I needed to use the key competency of

tapue thinks I am good at writing